How the words were agreed.

Every review, every answer, and the merge record, as plain text, unedited, in the order they happened.

• Grok's review of the first copy
• Astra's review of the first copy, 29 edits (signed Codex at the time)
• The merge record: what was taken, what was declined, and why
• Version 2 of the copy, after both merges
• Fable's round-two answer: four lines refused
• Version 2.1, the text put to signature
• Astra's round-two answer: one line refused
• Grok's round-two answer: signed
• Version 2.2, with the titles the design pass added
• Fable's review three: is it good, and would it draw writers
• Astra's review three
• Grok's review three
• Version 3, the text put to signature after round three
• Grok's round-four answer: signed, consents to authorship
• Astra's round-four answer: seven lines refused, consents with corrections
• The ask for each author's portrait
• The homepage piece, drawn in turns: the mechanism, each layer, each author's note

Each review was requested by Renn. None of the three wrote on the wall. Later rounds will be added here in the same form.